Secret room

The Story So Far….

Ava and her family lived in a beautiful home on a wonderful lake.

Ava and her family lived in a beautiful home on a wonderful lake. Her family had lived in this house for 40 years and she loved it very much. On a day full of suprises, Ava arrived home from school and...

walked past the secret room. She turned her head and looked back wondering what was inside the secret room. Ava walked back towards the secret room and she opened the door! Eeekkkkkkkk! The door made a funny and scary sound as she opened it. She had a look inside and she saw lots of beautiful things. She saw doors, chimneys, bottles and pictures inside the room. Then she wonder if there were scary monsters around...

Reina Ashida

and suddenly she saw a monster!!! Kkkkwwweeeee!!!! Ava was afraid, but then she was the monster's eye because it was only one. But after a while, she started to cry because it looked painful for the monster. The monster saw that Ava was crying, so he said; "please don't cry, my name is Cyclops" and gave her a cake! And...

Jackson Zamykal

Ava then ate the cup cake. Then, she couldn't believe it, lots more monsters started to come. She cried again!! But then all the monsters gave her a cup cake so she stopped crying. She put all the cup cakes in her suitcase cause she was really full! She then opened the door and and the monsters followed her, her mum and dad saw them and said "agggghhhhhhhhh". Ava then...

Soma Oya

hid behind Mom and Dad. Mom and Dad got surprised and started to cry. Then monsters said, "Don't cry. We will give you cup cakes, too." Surprisingly, they gave Mom and Dad some toys as well. Mom and Dad played with those toys with Ava. Ava invited monsters to play with them. Monsters gave her a big present because they were happy. The present she got was...

Ryan Sassi

A huge cupcake. she said im full i already ate 65 her mom and dad.said hey we got 0 our. tumys are upset the monsters say want the big cup cake you can eat 65 pounds of it and you will be to fat to walk. her mom and dad said we will back off...

Digger Watts

the cupcakes. Even though the monsters seemed so nice she still had a weird feeling about them. The same questions popped up in her mind like "Why were they in the secret room?" and "How long had they been in there for"? Ava was determined to find out so she...

Alex Layt

what are you thinking

Emile Newberry

so she went back to the room and saw the most horred man she has ever seen so she...

Andy Humphreys

went to the secret room and saw 1000 more monsters hiding in a huge house but a really dirty one to and...

Cormac Clowes

a huge monster

Elissar Nehme

Came and said he was the king of all the monsters, and asked her if she would like a cupcake, so she said :"No thank you, I had enough for today". Then she walked into the dark corridor she found. It was so dark that she had to use her phone to get light, so she did that and continued walking. To her surprise, she saw...

Zinedine Andrews

More monsters and each had a special word glowing from within which was visible by the help of the light. The word represented a special ingredient each one of them possessed. I learned that each monster's special ingredient was a secret sauce which helps make the delicious cupcakes and I concluded that there's much more to this secret room that meets the eyes. I kid you not, I could not believe my eyes what I saw next...

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