4 kids edited , 80 words , 3 COUNTRIES
TYPE: You Choose
“What! Where am I?” Ella asked herself nervously after waking up in the corner of a dark, creepy room. Creak! Went the floor boards as Ella cautiously stepped toward the door...
Ella's throat went dry as she heard breathing right in front of the other side of the door. She had no idea what was going on, but she needed to hide. Who knows who is in front of that door? Out of the corner of her eye, she saw a closet and her only choice was that. She dived to the closet as the door opened and she was stunned at who came in.
A man with scars entered the cell and with merciless eyes looked around in confusion until he saw the wardrobe. Smiling in an evil way he staggered over to the wardrobe as if he knew she was in there. As he got close she saw a whip at his belt and gnarled hands with overgrown filthy nails, he had many missing teeth and even from a few feet away she could smell his horrible breath......
As the putrid scent of his breath became more and more ghastly, Ella started to worry. She had no idea why she was here, and was terribly frightened of the man that was just inches from discovering her. He extended his long, gnarled fingernails and scraped the wardrobe handle. From the inside Ella could see the filthy doorknob turning. She held her breath, dizzy with fear. The door opened, creaking thunderously. Ella closed her eyes, petrified of what awaited her.
Country: New Zealand
She felt a bat near her and grabbed it. As soon as the man opened the wardrobe, Ella hit him with the bat in her hand and ran into a room.......
BY: Muhammad Shahmeer