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Story: Treasure hunt

4 kids edited , 80 words , 2 COUNTRIES

AGE: 10-13

THEME: Adventure

TYPE: You Choose

As he crumbled his fortune cookie he found a tiny map inside, and realised it was of his neighbourhood...

He started walking east, as the map said. He kept walking and walking until he came to the pet shop and he pushed open the door. Dogs barking, birds cheeping and an angry shopkeeper. "You! My shop is closing in 5 minutes and I'm going to the mall tonight so whatever you're doing, hurry up!" She said this all very fast.

BY: Malia

Country: Australia

DATE: 18/12/2017

As He quickly walked through the shop the shopkeeper got more grumpy and even more grumpy until she just blow up. “Come on... uhh, uh,”said the shopkeeper. “Just HURRY UP, here I will give you the key just put the key under the door. Just don’t for get to lock up.”

BY: Lachlan

Country: Australia

DATE: 18/12/2017

The boy was very curious as to why the peculiar shopkeeper had been so hasty. It was only 4.00pm. He decided to obey the shopkeeper's orders and started searching the dark store as quickly as possible. As he looked around, he was bewildered at the things he saw. There were many shelves, and all contained jars filled with strange things, such as eyeballs, frogs and much more. He heard a loud thud. He assumed it came from the back. Suddenly,

BY: Tai

Country: New Zealand

DATE: 27/06/2018

A cute kitten appeared in front of him with an innocent sweet face. "Aren't you just the cutest!" he cooed. Suddenly the cat lunged forward narrowing missing his cheek! The cat retreated into a corner, hissing when the boy stared at him. Okay found a crazy cat?! he thought with curiosity. Why would they have a weird cat in their "cuddly" shop? he thought. So many questions that would never be answered......

BY: Isabella

Country: Australia

DATE: 05/07/2018